Going through the dresses at the fabric inn
Looking for some clothes for my friend Robin
You know that girl who made my husband smile,
That time we went to the bar nearby.
She laughed at his jokes and gave his hair some strokes,
That night didn’t end until the next day broke.
He talked about her then day and night,
As if she was the princess and he was her knight.
I did get a little jealous, but that was all for nought,
I thought the right way to do this would be a gift and a little talk.
Should I go for denim or should I go for linen?
I’m looking for the dress that I’m gonna kill her in. 🙂
The Knight of Steel 
Super rhyming like post. Loved it.
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Thank you!😊
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O boy , your tales are getting sharper.
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Brilliant interpretation. Loved the idea that its a poem.. makes it almost less harsh and mean.
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Poetry has a knack of making terrible things seem beautiful
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Loved it! Of cos she should kill her. Go for it
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Few things better than a vengeful wife.
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Wish she gets the desired look to kill HIM than HER… Beautifully worded sinister thoughts!!!
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Thank you! Who knows she might kill him next. No one messes with her.
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Awesome!! Loved the verse 🙂
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Thank you!☺️
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You killed it! Lovely(not so lovely) little poem there
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Thank you!☺️ It was lovely on her part to do anything it takes to protect her love
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Love this!!!!!
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Thank you!😊
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The need to handle it well. 🙂 Didn’t expect the kill in the end. 🙂
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Hahahahah! What an epic end! Loved this!
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
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Thank you for such amazing prompts ☺️
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Aha, kill her with her sassiness! I like! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.
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For such a scary plan she is deceivingly composed. Loved the rhyme and the story. 😁
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Even scarier is the fact that she was going to go to that lady’s home, gift her the dress, ask her to try it and then kill her.
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Wow. This was a great take. Loved the poetic flow. And the best part, the ending. Throughout the post I thought maybe it has an ending like ‘Stepmom’ (Hollywood movie). But the end was super. Amazing take on the prompt. 🙂
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The best ending is the one we don’t see coming☺️
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Agree again!
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For me the interesting part was he actually talking about the other women with his wife. That’s some honesty and bravery he showed here! How often do we find such honest men. Wrong yet honest though 😛
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Haha, he must have been one courageous yet unethical man to flirt with other women while being married.
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hehe indeed! 😛
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